Sucked In

[Kap2310]

This is an original short film script I wrote for my screenwriting class:

http://www.mediafire.com/?bhmbwmd7rmjegqw

Please give it a read and tell me what you think. No criticism is too harsh for me.

[GhostHammer]

WAIT! Like Kap as in the one who had the avatar of the tlaking toilet Kap? :O