new intros... thoughts?

[bazongaman502]

hey you guys, been kinda bored as of late and have been working on some video intros...

i stumbled across ome templates that i liked and threw my own spin on them... either by a little or alot...

so tell me what you guys think.... any ideas to make them better (please be serious)

My favorite so far:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CcQA1or6_MA

I barely did much to this one, cuz i liked how it was anyways:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iN_cWGIHNJU

WATCH THEM IN HD (720)

bring on the opinions... please be nice

[Vestige]

Number 1, why? Like it better its longer, brighter, and just better.

[bazongaman502]

Number 1, why? Like it better its longer, brighter, and just better.

are you saying you like it or dont....

EDIT: nvm, i read your post wrong... any tips for the 2nd one?

[Deathhawk]

Make #2 longer, with more stuff happening. It just spins around an orb, and then there's some text. Maybe have the text come out of the orb?

I feel like #2 could be awesome, but you'd have to put alot of work into it.
#1 is pretty solid. Maybe shorten it a little, less time in 0:05 to 0:08, just cut out a second.

[Elementarykills]

Loving the second one, Can I get one made? Just EK or ElementaryKills

[bazongaman502]

Loving the second one, Can I get one made? Just EK or ElementaryKills

im actually thinking of making some for every member of Hate Mail... so give me some ideas and i can see what i can do...

Thank you for your imput Deathhawk, i also agree that #2 could be amazing, im still tweaking with it... the first one in my opinion is perectly fine, HOWEVER making it shorter may happen... the video is long, however due to its length, it makes it look good

[Elementarykills]

I would like it just like the first one. It's the colors I would have chosen. Just maybe make the red ball dark blue

[bazongaman502]

I would like it just like the first one. It's the colors I would have chosen. Just maybe make the red ball dark blue

so you just want the big ball's color changed?

btw, you need to add me on xbl

[Elementarykills]

Yep. Okay I will as soon as I can.

[bazongaman502]

Yep. Okay I will as soon as I can.

ill try to work on it tonight, once its done, ill send you the link to it on youtube... once your satisfied, ill send it to you via skype

[Carpe Vexillum]

1# Out of place, kinda goofy & no detail.

2# Too Plain, Too much negative space, music way to epic for the video, & no detail.

3# Both are cool, but they seem boring.


That's my experienced opinion, but hey what do you expect from templates. If you went into AE or another program and added some things to them I would approve.

[bazongaman502]

i dont have the money for AE tho, otherwise i would tho...

i fully understand your points and your not wrong... im still tweaking with these and others... if i can find AE cheap (or free) then id do it, but right now im saving up for alot of things

[Carpe Vexillum]

Pay for AE haha ? Oh your serious =P <3

[bazongaman502]

Pay for AE haha ? Oh your serious =P <3

im not a pirate... well i am, but not much anymore lol

[Silko]

I like the first one.