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bazongaman502
02-08-2012, 08:17 PM
what do you think? it took 16hours for it to render lol

watch in 1080 ;)


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7y5Fa2NKM7o&feature=youtu.be

Fuzzy
02-08-2012, 08:22 PM
It informs me that the video is private?

Acid
02-08-2012, 08:37 PM
It shows the same for me as well.

bazongaman502
02-08-2012, 08:57 PM
try now :)

VerbotenDonkey
02-08-2012, 09:00 PM
You misspelled "Source" xDDD But that was REALLY COOL. I loved it dude! You're coming along greatly with your effects!

Fuzzy
02-08-2012, 09:01 PM
It is looking good, one thing though near the end you misspelled source as "sorce'.

bazongaman502
02-08-2012, 09:09 PM
It is looking good, one thing though near the end you misspelled source as "sorce'.

damn grammar nazi's lol

...... back to 16 more hours of rendering i guess :(

Mythonian
02-08-2012, 09:17 PM
At the end, by the way, the "Games" part is a little difficult to see. You may want to brighten it a bit.

Also, the clip of Reach could be better. I think having an action-shot would be better, like a game of Hill 30 or something.

bazongaman502
02-08-2012, 09:33 PM
At the end, by the way, the "Games" part is a little difficult to see. You may want to brighten it a bit.

Also, the clip of Reach could be better. I think having an action-shot would be better, like a game of Hill 30 or something.

picky son of a bitch lolol jkjk

i was thinking that, but i delete 90% of all films i record after i upload them that way i still have room on my computer... i might just hope onto reach really quick, play a game or 2, find a good clip and record it then

d3ad1te
02-08-2012, 10:41 PM
Good work!

Work on what myth said! Plus remember to check spelling... I know I have to.

Juggernaut9473
02-08-2012, 11:11 PM
looking good man, other than the spelling good work :)

Nocte
02-08-2012, 11:52 PM
I feel like the gameplay was to blurry, and as people said before the text can be hard to read.

However I love the way you set it up, just a few tweaks and that'll be the coolest intro I've ever seen :p