Yes, you have a world filled of sewer humor for jokes. Use it.
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Yes, you have a world filled of sewer humor for jokes. Use it.
I love the story so far, can't wait to read more.
My over-all opinion is very good, I can't really spot any mistakes or things that don't make sense.
I agree with Eagle. I do think that WE SHOULD HAVE MoRE ENTRIES!!!!
Lol Jk take your time angel
I know it may seem like im bugging a lot about this but how is the next part of the story coming along? I know a lot of a stuff has been going on recently in the community so im not even sure if you've had time to continue writing yet. So hopefully we can get an update soon?
RAWWWRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RRRRRRRR UPDATE BLARRRRGGGGG
We need to keep this on the front page so Angel can see it.
*Waits*
Wow, right when the story was getting good too....
Hopefully in the next part we get to see more of the battles instead of a sewage drain almost taking out the REDDs
I just read the whole thing because of these posts and i thought it was amazing, but then it stoped.
Welcome to our world.Quote:
Originally Posted by johnkilla56