Follow the accords and be respectful and supportive. Constructive criticism is helpful but you know the line.
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Follow the accords and be respectful and supportive. Constructive criticism is helpful but you know the line.
Feel free to post comment, compliments, or critiques about the story. I can't guarantee I'll always follow your advice, as I am the final authority on where this story goes, but the more activity you guys post here, the more likely I'll want to write more. (It's always fun to see that people like your work, after all.)
Andimion, am I going to be able to post in my own closed topics, or be a moderator here?
I made you mod of this sub forum. Please make sure you close all your story posts so that nobody can post and ruin them.
You can do it in 1 of 2 ways. Either just post in that one topic, or create a new topic with a number progression system so people know the start from the finish. 1-100 You know what I mean.
I'll keep posting in that topic, and ask that everyone post their comments and stuff here. I definitely like the encouragement.
So guys...
What did you think?
I LOVE YOUR STORY.
Especially since my character is finally approved. :)
Your character is officially part of BLUE Squad (As I've called them for now.)
They're one of the main antagonists for a good bit of the story (Possibly all.)
When Delta regroups, prepare for some serious firefighting. The last bit was all about the backstory. This next bit, will be about some combat. I won't be using Andimion's perspective for the whole story. It's going to move around as I keep writing, so expect to see all of your character's perspective at some point.
Good idea on the multiple perspectives. Personally, these are my favorite kinds of stories. I am retiring for the night, so see you all tomorrow.
Angel, you should make a topic to apply to be in the story. Make in your primary post a list of all the people and their abilities. Make the bios a different post. Or do it how ever you want really. Its up to you.
I plan on having a topic of all the stuff you guys had for your characters, and my justifications for your abilities, and who is in what squad etc. I'm working on that now
Maybe ill draw you like a book cover haha just for shits n gigs.
I've been dabbling in digital art for the past month of so.