FC: Dark Rain Promo

[Carpe Vexillum]

Take it or leave it.

[Deathhawk]

Chocolate rain? Some stay dry.... others feel the pain?
Kuhblam, SING IT!


Here's my criticism; if you don't want it just don't read.

I liked the idea, the theme worked well with the aesthetics. I felt like you could have delivered more on that front; though.
The fundamentals still need work, but I understand that's the most annoying thing to be criticized on. Camera-work wasn't top quality, neither was the syncing... but I don't think that syncing should have happened at all (via the screen zooms...)
A cool thing to have done would've been to put some light rain sound in the backround.
The video sizes with the in/out tros didn't match the footage, which was awkward. Using the steps at the start was awkward, as its not a very acknowledged part of the map and it isn't very aesthetically pleasing. I liked the position of the camera for the start on pavillion though, it just needed to be smoother.

[HeavyArms]

To start off, in the beginning you hear YAY!. Next time I would make sure you get a soundtrack that dosnt have YAY! in it.

[Carpe Vexillum]

I put the yay in there on purpose, also im not taking opinions.

[Deathhawk]

I put the yay in there on purpose, also im not taking opinions.

Okay. Should I refrain on future videos? If you do want them from me, feel free to PM. Always interested in that.
I do feel that you are improving, though.

[Carpe Vexillum]

Okay. Should I refrain on future videos? If you do want them from me, feel free to PM. Always interested in that.
I do feel that you are improving, though.

Well I feel I am spending more time on them, nothing to do with me improving.

[Carpe Vexillum]

There was light rain, and i thought the steps were very pleasing, with the lights and the sharp edges it adds a nice tone to it. But art like beauty is in the eye.

[HeavyArms]

Well Im just saying, this seems like a serious type deal. Im not trying to put you down or anything but the YAY just threw me off.

[VerbotenDonkey]

Hellspawns is better xP

Nah, seriously, well edited and I love the rain effect. Good job.

[Carpe Vexillum]

Ill make you all a deal, Ill fix the fixable points brought up. (Aka everything except the syncing[that clip is nothing without the zoom] and camera work.)