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    Story Open Convo

    Follow the accords and be respectful and supportive. Constructive criticism is helpful but you know the line.


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    Re: Story Open Convo

    Feel free to post comment, compliments, or critiques about the story. I can't guarantee I'll always follow your advice, as I am the final authority on where this story goes, but the more activity you guys post here, the more likely I'll want to write more. (It's always fun to see that people like your work, after all.)

    Andimion, am I going to be able to post in my own closed topics, or be a moderator here?




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    Re: Story Open Convo

    I made you mod of this sub forum. Please make sure you close all your story posts so that nobody can post and ruin them.

    You can do it in 1 of 2 ways. Either just post in that one topic, or create a new topic with a number progression system so people know the start from the finish. 1-100 You know what I mean.


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    Re: Story Open Convo

    I'll keep posting in that topic, and ask that everyone post their comments and stuff here. I definitely like the encouragement.



    So guys...


    What did you think?




    "You must begin by gaining power over yourself; then another; then a group, an order, a world, a species, a group of species; finally, the galaxy itself."

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    Tuesday: 8:00-6:00
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    Thursday: 8:00-11:30 & 3:00-6:30
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    Re: Story Open Convo

    I LOVE YOUR STORY.


    Especially since my character is finally approved.

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    Re: Story Open Convo

    Your character is officially part of BLUE Squad (As I've called them for now.)

    They're one of the main antagonists for a good bit of the story (Possibly all.)

    When Delta regroups, prepare for some serious firefighting. The last bit was all about the backstory. This next bit, will be about some combat. I won't be using Andimion's perspective for the whole story. It's going to move around as I keep writing, so expect to see all of your character's perspective at some point.




    "You must begin by gaining power over yourself; then another; then a group, an order, a world, a species, a group of species; finally, the galaxy itself."

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    Tuesday: 8:00-6:00
    Wednesday: 4:30-6:30
    Thursday: 8:00-11:30 & 3:00-6:30
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    Re: Story Open Convo

    Good idea on the multiple perspectives. Personally, these are my favorite kinds of stories. I am retiring for the night, so see you all tomorrow.

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    Re: Story Open Convo

    Angel, you should make a topic to apply to be in the story. Make in your primary post a list of all the people and their abilities. Make the bios a different post. Or do it how ever you want really. Its up to you.


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    Re: Story Open Convo

    I plan on having a topic of all the stuff you guys had for your characters, and my justifications for your abilities, and who is in what squad etc. I'm working on that now




    "You must begin by gaining power over yourself; then another; then a group, an order, a world, a species, a group of species; finally, the galaxy itself."

    Monday: 4:30-6:30
    Tuesday: 8:00-6:00
    Wednesday: 4:30-6:30
    Thursday: 8:00-11:30 & 3:00-6:30
    Friday: 9:30-6:30

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    Maybe ill draw you like a book cover haha just for shits n gigs.

    I've been dabbling in digital art for the past month of so.


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