See, it's good feedback like that which makes me want to write more. Keep it coming, and I'll post another installment today.
"You must begin by gaining power over yourself; then another; then a group, an order, a world, a species, a group of species; finally, the galaxy itself."
I need to see Omega in action!
Also did Delta just blow up the tower or the depot? Cause it seemed to me that they blew up the tower with the way you wrote it.
Also I love how you use the Spartan's Forerunner abilities!
Keep it coming I love this story.
this story is so awesome, you need to make this a book redleader
If it can be possible, maybe later on have a story from the point of view from BRAVO team, just so there side of the story can be known as well
Already in the works.If it can be possible, maybe later on have a story from the point of view from BRAVO team, just so there side of the story can be known as well
Delta blew up the depot, and Omega launched the assault on the tower.
I won't be able to post another installment today, because I just figured out that I have an 8-page paper due tomorrow, plus a 20 minute presentation.
"You must begin by gaining power over yourself; then another; then a group, an order, a world, a species, a group of species; finally, the galaxy itself."
tomorrow then?
New Update on 05/07
Be ready for death...
"You must begin by gaining power over yourself; then another; then a group, an order, a world, a species, a group of species; finally, the galaxy itself."
update today?
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