Story Open Convo

[ChillSquishster]

Yeah, so far. I'm putting a new installment in today, which will introduce the new Sabres and just how advanced Lara really is. (So far, we've seen an AI of Cortana's caliber, but Lara is significantly more powerful than that.)

Yay for more story!!

Although now I know I will eventually die

[Juggernaut9473]

update?

[silversleek(GEN)]

whoa, was not expecting that.

[Juggernaut9473]

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE






































please?

[ChillSquishster]

It has been over 3 weeks since we have had an update, can we please have another?? After the last one I am dying to find out what happens next

[PhoenixPrime(GEN)]

Let's just say that the Brutes are not going to go about this peacefully...

[ChillSquishster]

Finally! Another great update. Can't wait to see what happens with the other team

[Juggernaut9473]

YAY FOR UPDATES

[Raider0614]

This story is so damn cool. Damn, I must admit. I'm really jealous of your storytelling, Phoenix. Consider me a fan.

[PhoenixPrime(GEN)]

I was wondering how long it would take Juggernaut to see the new update. Took me forever to write that. I rewrote it about eight times, and just decided that I wasn't cool with the Colonel dying this chapter. Therefore, he lived.


I also thought about having Victor die, but figured that was a real douche move.


Thanks Raider, glad I've got a new fan.