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    Re: Story Open Convo

    Dude that would be tight!




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    Re: Story Open Convo

    30 minutes or so of doodling.


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    Re: Story Open Convo

    Need something fixed. My charecters name is Sev not Shev.

    Aside from that I enjoyed it. keep on goin home slice.

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    Re: Story Open Convo

    *High Fives WsAngel*

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    Re: Story Open Convo

    It was well written and honestly seems pretty badass. To me I picture a WWII scene only with Top Secret projects being used.


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    Re: Story Open Convo

    Very nice, Angel.

    However, I would probably introduce a "Featured" section in each posting you make to show who is who.

    EX: Andimion as Andimion; EriRI as Eric; etc.
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    Re: Story Open Convo

    how often can we expect a new entry Angel???

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    Re: Story Open Convo

    Im pretty sure, other than a select few.. Your going to know who is who. Loco and and a few others would require that kind of background.


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    Re: Story Open Convo

    hehe. My name is Jacob "Bacon" Hogg

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    Re: Story Open Convo

    Advice? Add a character list section as Maxdoggy said. Otherwise, good writing.

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