Story Open Convo

[PhoenixPrime(GEN)]

Andimion, your troop count is incorrect. (This may be my fault though.)


The two people that were encountered in the first installment are not encountered at all in the second one. Andimion retreated from those two, and what they did is unknown to the Imperial guys. Those two were Sam and Allan Harrison


The three encountered in this were the rest of the Blue Bravo Squad. The light green Spartan is Bacon, the Sky Blue Spartan is Victor. The guy wearing a cutdown version of MJOLNIR is Lucius Black, which was why he could keep up with Loco.



Just to clarify, the command center and the anti-air gun bunker are in two different locations. I'll try to keep you guys informed on all that stuff. I'll update the bio's with armor colors and stuff like that.


Dinner's character hasn't been seen yet. If he did, you would know.

[Andimion]

Mini nuke.. Sounds so retarded..

[PhoenixPrime(GEN)]

I kind of envisioned him as being one of those guys that you hear about a lot in the story, but you don't actually face off til the end or something like that. Otherwise it would just be too cheap and pointless.

Having him a ship-killer though, that gives another reason as to why the Empire has lost so much ground to the Brotherhood, which is what I wanted to do.

[Hazy]

The whole mini-nuke in itself seems to be a kind of pat down way of describing dinner's power, the way I see it.

I believe, from what i've read in its entirety, it's supposed to be some sort of huge ass energy pulsation similar to the one seen on the blue spartan that wrecked Eric. Except on a much larger scale, and with more explosives. Lots of explosives.

Anyways I forgot to give you a compliment on the battles in the stories. Awesome job! Whenever I read them I always end up with cliche's like...."he shot him, and proceeded to dive to cover. He then shot back"......Great descriptiveness....ocity. ..thing....mabob....the batman symbol.

But yeah honestly this is looking up to be an awesome tale Keep up the good work.

[Mi Boys Dinner]

Mini nuke.. Sounds so retarded..

Dinner comes up with something, at least one person says it's retarded.

I ain't even mad. Deal with it.

[d3ad1te]

Ok done with the cover, loved the new entry.


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and the MI had mini nukes!

[Maxdoggy]

Very nice, good sir!

(Which good sir am I talking about? Why, both of you, d3ad1te and Angel both!)

[Nocte]

I don't know if you are going to be adding more Dead1te but it looks really good.

[PhoenixPrime(GEN)]

I definitely like the final version of the cover.


The new entry will likely be posted Saturday. I'll be writing it while practicing on Halo for the battles next Sunday. (That's right, I'm fighting.)

[Hazy]

I'm pretty sure we figured that....