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    Early Bird Gets the Wrom

    Alright, so as some of you may have already seen, I have finished the BETA version of the Prologue for the series for the site I am writing. But instead of telling you how great it is, I am going to throw out a little treat, and a way to help me. I would like one person from the community to post here asking for the BETA script and tell me what they think of it. It still needs some polish, but I want to see what people think, and what I should try to tweak and so on and so forth.

    So, first person that posts here I will send a BETA script for the Prologue.

    And keep checked in with this thread as I will post here again for when other chapters are done and need a guinea pig or two.
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    Posted. Do your worst.


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    Re: Early Bird Gets the Wrom

    And sent, thanks for the quick reply Ve, and thanks for helping me see how provide a bit of polish to it.

    To everyone else, don't worry, I will be posting spots for other chapters later for you to jump on, and if the people that read the beta scripts get back to me quickly, and I finish polishing quickly I should get the prolouge out there by tomorrow evening.
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    "Addio amico mio"

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    Re: Early Bird Gets the Wrom

    Damn ye Carpe.

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    Re: Early Bird Gets the Wrom

    Sorry I haven't reviewed your script yet.

    Also, if someone could please move this to Creative Writing that'd be great.

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    Re: Early Bird Gets the Wrom

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuhblam View Post
    Sorry I haven't reviewed your script yet.

    Also, if someone could please move this to Creative Writing that'd be great.

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    Nothing gets passed Skynet. Keep up the work Salv, can't wait to see the finished project

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