Artic Eagle Story ~ Bellator

[Lol its James]

Sorry Poxar I'll try better next time... Master

[OPOC1L1PSE]

Sorry Poxar I'll try better next time... Master

Just trying to help...

[Lol its James]

I was joking man, yeah I know I put them out right before I go to bed and on my iPhone. So I don't proof read anything until its actually out and even then I even told unicorn that I don't really worry about my grammar as much as other people. I know I should it's a good idea

[ItsGettingMessi]

I would highly consider you proof read before you post... It has potential, but it's hard to get into when everything is all jumbled up. Same thing with Messi's story. You sometimes confuse present and past participles... This makes it a bit more difficult to read and halts the dynamic flow of words when reading...

well i have a problem that there is a huge internal crack going through one part of my laptap, and i have two smaller ones. each have like some kind blue stuff that i cant see through.

[Silent Arbiter1]

New chapter up don't wory arbiter your not dead and ur not the enemy

Ok good and now I know when the story is.

[Lol its James]

Yeah

[Lol its James]

Next chapter up more people are involved

[ArchAngelLloyd]

about time you had me rear my ugly mug

[Lol its James]

I had to make some body an ass hole and it couldn't be you lol. Nicks cool but he's the only other officer that wanted to be in it

[Nicholas Sapien]

I had to make some body an ass hole and it couldn't be you lol. Nicks cool but he's the only other officer that wanted to be in it

I don't mind being one lol