Take it or leave it.
Chocolate rain? Some stay dry.... others feel the pain?
Kuhblam, SING IT!
Here's my criticism; if you don't want it just don't read.
I liked the idea, the theme worked well with the aesthetics. I felt like you could have delivered more on that front; though.
The fundamentals still need work, but I understand that's the most annoying thing to be criticized on. Camera-work wasn't top quality, neither was the syncing... but I don't think that syncing should have happened at all (via the screen zooms...)
A cool thing to have done would've been to put some light rain sound in the backround.
The video sizes with the in/out tros didn't match the footage, which was awkward. Using the steps at the start was awkward, as its not a very acknowledged part of the map and it isn't very aesthetically pleasing. I liked the position of the camera for the start on pavillion though, it just needed to be smoother.
Last edited by Deathhawk; 03-08-2011 at 12:01 AM.
To start off, in the beginning you hear YAY!. Next time I would make sure you get a soundtrack that dosnt have YAY! in it.
"AA's for quiters."
"Welcome to Walmart, get your shit and get out."
There was light rain, and i thought the steps were very pleasing, with the lights and the sharp edges it adds a nice tone to it. But art like beauty is in the eye.
Well Im just saying, this seems like a serious type deal. Im not trying to put you down or anything but the YAY just threw me off.
"AA's for quiters."
"Welcome to Walmart, get your shit and get out."
Hellspawns is better xP
Nah, seriously, well edited and I love the rain effect. Good job.
Ill make you all a deal, Ill fix the fixable points brought up. (Aka everything except the syncing[that clip is nothing without the zoom] and camera work.)
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