Nice job, Rain. I would suggest adding our actual website instead of our YouTube one (considering they would be watching the video on YouTube).
Nice job, Rain. I would suggest adding our actual website instead of our YouTube one (considering they would be watching the video on YouTube).
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I think Rain takes the cake right now
Here we go, the same intro but with a link to the website as opposed to the YouTube channel:
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I think the colors need to be more "bold" (The red looks pink and the blue isn't very visible)
Honestly think the music is a little cheesy but it's probably hard to find some that isn't.
Aside from that it's pretty cool.
Fantastic job.
In addition to what Deathhawk said (and these are all very small things):
- At the start, it's pitch black for nearly 1.5 seconds or so. If you could reduce this to like 0.3-0.5 or so, that'd be nice. (just feels like it's starting up very slow and suddenly gets very fast, so I think starting it faster would be better)
- The text for the website seems to disappear for about a half second or so after 4 seconds into it. Just seems to randomly do it without a reason.
- After the end, if you could continue it another second or so, with the screen black and the music continuing, that'd make transitioning from it to the actual video smoother.
Looking forward to using this in videos.
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The only thing I can suggest is adding in the Forerunner Conflict Emblem in the background.
I saw this, and I just came a little.... Rain bud, props to you.
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